Monday, 28 April 2014

Review of Sidi Diallo's London premiere of The Soul


This movie was premiered at the Lighthouse Camberwell on Saturday 26th April 2014. There were organizational issues which included the movie starting pretty late leading to the director and one of the promoters Ikenna Obi doing damage control and having to apologise at the end of the movie. Those present on the red carpet were members of the cast  including Ikenna Obi, Olivia Eze, Fatima Jebe Maada Bio, Collins Archie-Pearce, Bella Gassama, Sidi Diallo, members of Nollywood UK including Theordora Ibekwe Oyebade, Ayo Oyebade, Marie Gomez, Toksy Bello, Niyi Towolawi, M A Benson, Riyike Alayande. Also noticeable were Gospel singer Kenneth Benson, Uvi Orogun. The night started with entertainment by Saxy on the saxophone and and Jdove. The MC for the night was Collins Archie-Pearce
Storyline: The Soul was written, produced, directed by Sidi Diallo who also played the lead character. The movie was centred around a tale of two beautiful sisters (Mary and Hannah) both top models, in love with the same man (Alex). However the man was only in love with one of them. Love brought conflict, envy and hate between the sisters which ended in one of the sisters being murdered.
The storyline was great but the production and director’s cut were appalling and all over the place and it was so hard to follow. As a critic, watching the first 15 minutes of a movie, I should have an idea of the theme of the movie. However, in this movie, the beginning of the movie did not correlate with the rest of the movie and I am still trying to understand the relevance.
Although we are told that the story is based on a true life story, part of the storyline was unrealistic. A typical example was where there was a murder enquiry and a serving police officer asks to be paid to carry out the investigation in the UK and is drunk. No suspected gets interviewed under caution in a police station, This is all phony and unrealistic. I am of the view that when you want to tell a story, you must research properly how to present the story to the public. It might have been better if the policeman was presented as a PI rather than a policeman. For a murder enquiry, no policeman would be interviewing witnesses in the park and in some cases not taking notes but in a police station under caution and witnesses making witness statements.
While I appreciate effort and understand that this was meant to be based on a real life story, I cannot give more than 4.5 for the storyline.
Cast: The cast included Sidi Diallo, Fatima Jabbe Maada Bio, Uche Odoputa, Ikenna Obi, Collins Archie-Pearce, Atto Eric, Ferguson Jack, Bella Gassama, Olivia Eze, Happiness, Chica Michelle, Craig Melbourne, Labinot Zeqiri. Joy Oyakhilome, Christianah Awotayo, Princess Abiye and LB Brown.
There were a mix of experience and non experience. As a reviewer and critic, I need to look at the good and the bad sides. Let us start with the positives. Some of the cast were natural and brought their experience to play. In this regard, I would like to mention Collins, Uche, Fatima, Ikenna & Olivia as they used their experience to try and tell the story.
However, some of the cast were just like they crammed their lines and were all over the movie. Diction is also important when trying to tell a story. If one is trying to play American or British with an accent, they need to have that accent or just be themselves and stick to what they know. In this movie, I could tell that even Sidy was African which was good, but some of the actresses tried to speak in British accent and they failed woefully. I must also mention consistency. In some scenes for example Collins was presented as a father looking old even to his teeth and in some scenes he was looking young even though he was still playing the role of the father. I saw him in a different light when he looked old and that was good, but was spoilt when they forgot the role he was actually playing. For the cast, for effort, I would award 5.5
Sound: One could hear buzzy sounds in most scenes. An example was when mother and son were speaking at the house. Also sometimes background music and buzzy noises overshadow the voices of cast. A typical example was at the party and at Ben's home. There was also poor sound mix at the modelling office between Ann and Mike. In most cases the buzzes and music made it difficult to hear what the cast was actually saying. Bottom line, the sound was not too good. I would award 4.5 for sound.

Picture quality: in some cases, there was not enough headroom, most of the character was were not in the camera frame as was evident in most of the scenes. In the birthday scene, there was no headroom and it seemed that the camera was moving. In this scene, the pictures were so shaky. In some cases, the picture was so dark and it seemed as if the colour grading was not in existence. In my honest opinion, I think the recording was not professionally done. In some cases, these issues made the movie difficult to watch. I would recommend that the Director should go back and watch the movie and see how some of these issues can be addressed. For picture quality, I would award 4.

Overall: To me, if the movie was properly researched and the story told properly, my review would have been different. Like I said earlier, the story in itself is good but the packaging was the problem in my honest view. When people begin to sleep in a movie, it tells a story. I have been to late night movies and seen movies and still not slept, I have watched movies including Nollywood in languages I dont understand with good sub-titles and still did not sleep. There were elements of humour in this movie and there was passion and enthusiasm form the writer.

However, I would recommend that in future, as a script writer, the same person should not produce and direct so that someone else can see what migh have been missed, Two eyes they say are better than one. Our passion at Babso.org is to see Nollywood Movies compare to Hollywood Movies in the near future, but this would take research, resilience and excellence. Overall, I would issue this movie 5.5. I think Sidy should see these as positive criticisms that would enable him go back to the drawing board in his next project.

My overall score out of a possible 50  is 24  which would rate the movie as 4.8  out of a possible 10

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